HEY WHAT IS UP?
Here is my sketchbook assignment. It's of St. Patrick. I call it "Revenge!"
You know, the whole St. Pat running the pagans out of Ireland? Well, they are back. (That sounds kinda like a movie tagline). Celtic knots, even simple ones, are hard to make up. (For me, I am not a pattern minded person).

This is part of something I'm not done with yet. It's kind of Sgt. Rock inspired. WWII is now my favorite thing. I mean, that shit is crazy.

More comic pages, some stuff in the middle was taken out cause it's embarrassing or whatever. But I have 16 pages done, and the first chapter looks like it will be 25, so that's pretty good. This is turning out to be very possible.





Ignore the fact that the trees are floating in the 3rd panel. I am gonna fix that.
Allison, you said you had ideas on paneling? Tell me, cause I could use some ideas. I don't want to get really crazy, in fact, not even diagonal lines unless there is a reason for it, but some ideas would be nice. As you can see, most of mine are pretty simple and just for the purpose of making the story get told in the correct order.
Also, I am working on as few face close ups as possible, except when really needed, so it doesn't become lame or a manga. The problem is the story is kind of about the characters feelings and shit, and I think thought bubbles are dumb, and it's hard to do voice overs or whatever without it sounding dumb, so the only way for me to have them express emotion is through words and faces, but when they have concealed emotions... that is difficult to handle.
Also, I am not sure if I said this already, but
THE CHARACTERS DONT HAVE SEX.
I am being more appropriate then Rachael.
Sure, they are underage brothers who might want to hanky panky a little.
But
they
don't.
(Maybe they do other stuff though maybe).